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Unit 3 Story (Space Wars)

November 1, 2009 Leave a comment Go to comments

Now this one, I like!!!

In the Name of God

Name: Reza Takhshid
Class: Reading & Comprehension 1

Assignment: A Story on 3rd set of words

Title: Space Wars

8923, the war between Uranus and Neptune had just came to an end. Sir Lefinus and his counterpart Sir Ajitune were each to give a peace making speech, to be broadcast live across the solar system.

Uranusians were exhilarated as their leader took the stand and started his speech. Firstly he avowed that the war was over and that prior to the gathering peace contracts were signed. He continued and stated that: “many industrial complexes of Neptune has been defaced as a result of my irresponsible actions, therefore Uranus will help rebuild these facilities” Neptunians showed their appreciation by striking their feet to the ground. Sir Lefinus continued: “we will not let depredations of this war hold Neptune back from development”

The leader of Uranus spoke for about an hour and near the end of his speech he talked about how hypothetical it was to think that Uranus started this war to extort natural resources from Neptune. He continued that he had given the order to bomb Neptune only because Sir Ajitune refused to add him to his Facebook’s friends list, first. After this controversial statement the denizens of both planets looked askance at him as it was hart to construe his statement in a positive way. Yet it was time to put aside the rage and efface this tragedy off of their minds once and for all.

After that Sir Ajitune was to read out the contents of the contracts which were signed to bring war to an end. Very soon after he started, all were bored as it was very hard for the people to understand the interplanetary law terminologies and assimilate the meaning of what was being read to them. As the result, Uranusians were so bored that they started to fight and war was once again to be carried on for the most childish reasons.

  1. leila zonouzi
    November 4, 2009 at 5:07 pm

    hi! cool blog! i like your stories and this was the best yet!!! the facebook part was hilarious!!!!

  2. Rez(A)
    November 7, 2009 at 11:51 pm

    Thanks …

  3. November 13, 2009 at 4:56 pm

    -i think your using of hypothetical does not suit your purpose of using it. my suggestion for here is : illusory, imaginary, hallucinatory, chimerical,…
    (but you had to use hypothetical somewhere in your text)

    now lets find some fun in your celestial story:
    8923, Lefinus and Ajitune… facebook account! hahaaahaa, interplanetary law terminology…


    i like your idea of the story but its ending was not as exhilarating as it began ,still not cold as where the action was taking place ;- >

  4. Rez(A)
    November 13, 2009 at 6:21 pm

    Hypothetical = imagined or suggested but not necessarily true so I think it covers that imaginary which you are suggesting … but I’ll ask to make sure its correctly used.

    and about the ending, we have to keep our stories short, and also squeeze in ideas in which the words could be used.

    thank you for the time …

    looking forward to ur (u and peyman and hopefully some of the class mates!!!) comments on the other stories as well …

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